For many years I wrote an acrostic goodbye to my
outgoing seniors and, since then, I have tried to write a little ditty for
every student I have taught. I have not always found the time or energy to
piece a poem together, but for my first freshmen crew at Fairfield, I found
time to doodle a 24 stanza verse.
I was fortunate to have the same kids for two
semesters, each of us new to our campus. Today, we meet for the last time
ii. (excerpt)
A sking Emily for insight is fine by me
u see, and that Grammer game, grammatically,
s hades away the cinematography of
t hose scenes which slide forth in a flash (like
Charlie,
I also saw my father cry during MASH), but
n ow I whimper at everything, especially
B ecause I’m a foolish imp who tries to hustle,
e gotistically, as an intellectual pimp, you see,
but I
g et tongue-tied in silliness like a hyperactive
chimp
i n a laboratory of clowns. This must be the improv
for
n eophytes until the clock winds each of us down.

Bryan saw my writing emerge
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yet thought about what
a word may mean or
never considered why
Read those words as
if they were from a first
personal draft or even if so
lame that each and
every lousy ass sentence was
yearning for revision or a
Clear thought and counterbalance to
reality but and er
ahh there's the rub a stolen
note or phrase passing
dandily along even
a word that doesn't exist
lousy Websters
loser you lose!
J okes always on us
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I'm traveling through Syracuse when you're graduating. given that we never met up when you were there and I was in Rochacha it might be worth seeing that will be a failed meetup too.
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